Thursday 23 April 2015

My World War 1 Poem

The leaves were dancing
as the soldiers were falling
onto the muddy ground.
I was shaking with fear.

Now I lie in Flander’s Field.
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous26 April 2015 at 21:54

    A moving wee Anzac poem Jessica. Simple, short sentences can sometimes carry powerful messages. Well done and keep up the great work.

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  2. Anonymous10 May 2015 at 19:42

    so sad

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  3. Anonymous10 May 2015 at 19:45

    A really good poem and used some really good language.Well done Jessica.

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  4. Anonymous10 May 2015 at 19:46

    kai pa Jessika you really made me think about all those soldiers who died for us
    well done

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